If I Were Cupid [ GOD of Love ]

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By warrioRR

About Poem

This little poem about Love's situation. Well every body have some lover I think so and may be the girl is not giving importance to her lover not full fill his desires, just like in this poem. So he become Cupid the god of love and Watched her all the time what she do what she'll do to make him please but he won't listen her.

Cupid [ GOD of Love ]
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Cupid [ GOD of Love ]

Poem

If I were Cupid

You would come among flowers

Serve them in my feet

To make me please

I would live high above the skies

You'll call me God of love

I watched you every time

When you kneel down

I accept you greeting

But,

Won't show them on you

When you open

Your fasten hands for pray

I listen it with passion

but

I won't full fill your desire

Even, If I will have control

Just like now you have CONTROL

To make me please

or......................

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Comments

Lady_E profile image

Lady_E Level 7 Commenter 24 months ago

Lovely Poem. Its nice playing Cupid.

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Nellieanna Level 8 Commenter 24 months ago

It's certainly interesting. Beautiful words. Maybe a bit demanding? LOVE must happen of itself or it's not really love. No amount of insistance can make it happen. The only thing that might happen from insistance is comforming and that is not love.

Lover 24 months ago

Looks like your girl have control on you Happiness

well live in dreams and be a Cupid

Lover 24 months ago

I'm going to copy it for my girlfriend. Nice work that's why I come back

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warrioRR Hub Author 24 months ago

Thank you all for your nice and kind comments

And Nellienna once again your comment makes me thinking about new creations

thanks for it

ralwus 23 months ago

I think I am better off as me, but it might be fun being cupid for a day or two.

Ravi kumar 23 months ago

Good poem

It seems like

If I were Lord of Tartary

am I right

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magnoliazz Level 2 Commenter 23 months ago

This cupid has a bit of a dark side.

To be possessed by another so deeply can be painful.

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