I Have Everything Except You
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I don't know when this poem comes i my mind and when i wrote it. Only thing is this I love my this creation. I don' t know readers can enjoyed it or not?
Some people in this have everything money, love, beauty, peace, war, fame, success,... and many many more. But every one miss some thing it is possible because everything bring some sufferings with it. Money and love brings restlessness, beauty brings danger and if you want to live in peace stay away from love.
Poem
You says
By the grace of God
I have lot of Benefactions
My eyes have deepness of see
and
Magic of evening
When I speak
Flowers get blossom
Softness of my mood
Is better than wine
My words
Give colors to rainbow
My cheeks are redder than Ruby
and
Hot than the sun
My lips are cuter than pink little daisy
Finger tips are soft Patel's of rose
Clouds gathered when I open my hairs
When I sings
Wind collects word from my lips
My words build faces
and make them glow
My art gives realty to imagination
My love
I heard all what you say
I just Wanna tell you
From stars to moon
From sky to earth
I have Everything
Except you
I have Everything
Except you
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Really creation is cute and the Images are also cute
great creation
I love it
This is beautiful...I know the feeling. Been there many many times.
I love to read it
Beautifully illustrated song of the heart - I'm glad you chose to share :-)
Lots of sadness in this poem, you could have all the money in the world, but if you do not have that one special person, you have nothing.
I think just about everyone gets their hearts broken at least once.
REALY ENJOYABLE
"if you want to live in peace stay away from love" - I like your "view" here. Love but avoid that deep love that comes with butterflies. Beautiful poem. Thank you WarrioRR!
"Finger tips are soft Patel's of rose"
I love that line,it is so beautiful. You write with such beauty and your art is the same, You are a very gifted person. I am glad that I followed Micky Dee here for now I am a fan. Thank you so much for gracing us with your gifts. aloha oe
Duh, this one blowing me away. Such a beautiful poem with strong emotion. You captive me in it! Vote up of course! Beautiful and awesome.













Nellieanna Level 8 Commenter 23 months ago
Most interesting poetry and truly beautiful thoughts. Thanks for sharing!
The paintings are exquisite. I think you may be the painter??