I Have Everything Except You

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By warrioRR

About Poem

I don't know when this poem comes i my mind and when i wrote it. Only thing is this I love my this creation. I don' t know readers can enjoyed it or not?

Some people in this have everything money, love, beauty, peace, war, fame, success,... and many many more. But every one miss some thing it is possible because everything bring some sufferings with it. Money and love brings restlessness, beauty brings danger and if you want to live in peace stay away from love.

I Have Everything
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I Have Everything
I have Nothing
I have Nothing

Poem

You says

By the grace of God

I have lot of Benefactions

My eyes have deepness of see

and

Magic of evening

When I speak

Flowers get blossom

Softness of my mood

Is better than wine

My words

Give colors to rainbow

My cheeks are redder than Ruby

and

Hot than the sun

My lips are cuter than pink little daisy

Finger tips are soft Patel's of rose

Clouds gathered when I open my hairs

When I sings

Wind collects word from my lips

My words build faces

and make them glow

My art gives realty to imagination

My love

I heard all what you say

I just Wanna tell you

From stars to moon

From sky to earth

I have Everything

Except you

I have Everything

Except you

Created By warrioRR
Created By warrioRR

Comments

Nellieanna profile image

Nellieanna Level 8 Commenter 23 months ago

Most interesting poetry and truly beautiful thoughts. Thanks for sharing!

The paintings are exquisite. I think you may be the painter??

Remlo 23 months ago

Really creation is cute and the Images are also cute

great creation

I love it

Pachuca213 23 months ago

This is beautiful...I know the feeling. Been there many many times.

Yaun Li 23 months ago

I love to read it

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SilverGenes Level 4 Commenter 23 months ago

Beautifully illustrated song of the heart - I'm glad you chose to share :-)

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magnoliazz Level 2 Commenter 23 months ago

Lots of sadness in this poem, you could have all the money in the world, but if you do not have that one special person, you have nothing.

I think just about everyone gets their hearts broken at least once.

MULLAN MANSOOR 23 months ago

REALY ENJOYABLE

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago

"if you want to live in peace stay away from love" - I like your "view" here. Love but avoid that deep love that comes with butterflies. Beautiful poem. Thank you WarrioRR!

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Sa`ge 19 months ago

"Finger tips are soft Patel's of rose"

I love that line,it is so beautiful. You write with such beauty and your art is the same, You are a very gifted person. I am glad that I followed Micky Dee here for now I am a fan. Thank you so much for gracing us with your gifts. aloha oe

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Freya Cesare Level 4 Commenter 18 months ago

Duh, this one blowing me away. Such a beautiful poem with strong emotion. You captive me in it! Vote up of course! Beautiful and awesome.

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